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Mr Double's Palisades

Nephew and Nice Fun
Written by Tanzer

I had been looking forward to my trip to Chicago for three and a half weeks. About the time my eleven-year-old niece Janie had went back home after spending a week with my wife and me. My wife had been gone for a few days and Janie and I spent that time learning about each other. All about each other. (See "My Niece Janie" on mrdouble.com for the whole story) Our passionate, frenzied two-day exploration of each other's bodies had ended abruptly when my wife returned from her business trip. But we had planned on spending some time together when I visited Chicago. Janie and her thirteen-year-old brother Mark (my namesake) lived close enough that it would be no problem for me to pick them up and have them stay at the hotel with me.

My wife was pleased (although clueless) about my excitement over the trip, even encouraging me to leave on Saturday instead of Sunday evening so that the kids and me would have more time together. I readily agreed. She also insisted that I pack the video camera so that I could get some film of the kids to bring back to her. I packed six tapes - three my wife would later see and another three that would be, well, personal.

I left early Saturday morning with a mixture of anticipation and scared excitement. I wasn't sure if Janie would still want to do that stuff with me now that she'd had time to think about things. I also didn't have a plan on how to incorporate or exclude Mark - depending on his reactions. But I was hopeful that my increasingly detailed fantasy of a pre-pubescent three-way would come true. I hoped to reap the pleasures of their young flesh in every grown-up way I could imagine.

When I arrived at the kid's trailer park I grew depressed. It was a stink hole of a place for kids to grow up in. My sister-in-law wasn't there (no surprise) and left the kids only a curt "good bye, have fun, be good" note before disappearing for the day. I left her a note to let her know that I'd picked up the kids, we got their bags and headed to Chicago, a two-hour drive.

Mark was reserved and quiet, but we hadn't seen each other in a few years. Janie on the other hand chatted non-stop, filling the silence in the car. I could tell that she was excited, which pleased me a lot. Had she acted reserved or shy or even fearful, I'm not sure what I would have done.

We got to the Embassy Suites a little after 3:00. Our room was ready and we were allowed to check in right away. I travel a lot, so the inside of the hotel had no effect on me, but the kids were in awe. The series of waterfalls, the ducks swimming in the pond, the soft music in the atrium all led to an incredible first experience. I smiled and looked at it through their eyes and was again impressed with the hotel.

We went to our twelfth-floor room and got settled. The kids ran around checking out the TV, the large bathroom and the back, separated bedroom. Their excitement was infectious.

Then Mark came out of the bedroom. "Hey Uncle Mark, where are we going to sleep?" He asked.

"In the bedroom, goof!" I responded.

"But there's only one bed!" He protested.

I went into the bedroom, surveyed the room and lied, "Well, we were supposed to get two! Darn it! And the manager said we got the last room, too. So I guess we can't change." I scratched my head, pretending to work a solution out. "Well, we could either all sleep in that bed. It's a king, so it's big enough. Or Janie and I could sleep in here if you want to sleep on the couch. It pulls out into a bed. Or I could sleep on the couch and you and Janie could share the bed."

Mark thought about that for a moment and said, "I think Janie and I could share the bed. We're brother and sister. You can sleep on the couch, if that's okay?"

I was disappointed but not surprised. "Sure. That'd be fine. Okay with you Janie?"

She was pouting. I knew that she had some ideas about the weekend too. "Well, I think we should all share the bed. You paid for it."

Her brother shrugged and said, "Okay. Whatever.".....(cont)

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This story is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places, and incidents either are products of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or locales or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.

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